Rewrite the scene by REVERSING the point of view. 

You can change the tone. 

              turn the victims into the offenders. 

You can suggest actions. 

Vote for the best ideas. 

2) You may suggest and vote for the place where you want the scene to take place here .

3) Suggest actions for the rewriting of the scene by clicking on the following link and vote for the best place. 

4) On the document below, rewrite the scene ad add your name to it. You can use the following link .