Twintales 9-10: Jo
https://twin.titanpad.com/5 - version 2
Collaborators:
Beatriz Lourenço, Agrupamento de Escolas de Sátão, Portugal
Watfa Rahhal and Najah Diwawni, Lycée Haffouz, Tunisia
lkay ÇEKİRDEK-Dr. İlhami Tankut Anatolian High School - Antalya / TURKEY
Tomislav Turkalj, Klara Meašić, Lora Vrankić and Franka Antonia Sindičić, Gimnazija Bernardina Frankopana, Ogulin - Croatia
And the story goes like this:
Johanna Hiller, known as Jo, is a sixteen-year-old girl, who is wrongly accused of murdering five students of her school, including her best friend Tom. She has black painted hair and blue eyes. She had a twin sister, named Alison, who died on her birthday slipping in a wet rock which made her fall into a river, drowning herself. She’s a lonely figure who attends a dangerous place called Arcadia, an illegal bar placed in an abandoned building where new rock bands would perform.
Jo is sent to a special prison where they place teens with bad behavior called Orders of Hope managed by a cruel Romanian man called Losif Razvan, who believed in discipline and in punishment as a way to eradicate evil.
During her stay in prison, she faces many obstacles set by different people, yet she is never going to stop looking for the real killer, the one who ruined her life.
Beginning of the story proposed by Beatriz Lourenço, Agrupamento de Escolas de Sátão, Portugal
One day she met a man in prison; he was imprisoned for a simple reason and he will spend two months there. They fast became two best friends and she told him everything about her case. His name was jack. After he was of the prison and he decided to help her to work hard to discover the real killer .One day when he was sitting in a café he hears two people speaking about this bad crime .When he is sure that they are the real criminals he denounced them and went to court and met the lawyer to make things rights.
Finally she is free now and for Jack he is now her husband and she wouldn’t forget his advice forever and ever. Evil will never prevail; Justice will triumph in the end.
Story continued by Watfa rahhal and Najah diwawni, Lycée Haffouz, Tunisia
Meanwhile years passed and Jo and Jack have twins. They are a very happy family. When their twins were sixteen years old, they had an interesting experience. When their twins were in a bar, they met a woman just like their mother. They were so shocked that they could not move nor talk. As soon as they recovered from the shock, they tried to contact her. But she disappeared. They could not tell their mother about this woman. After a while the twins met her again. She revealed that she was their mother's twin sister. But everyone thought that she had died. In fact she was alive. Then she began to tell her story in tears.
According to her story; she fell in love with a man. Then she wanted to marry him but one day he suddenly disappeared. Later on she learnt that her sister was accused of killing five students of her school. But before she went to see her, the man who she loved, came and forced her not to see her twin. Because he was the real killer and he didn't want anyone to know the truth. So he prevented her to meet her sister and locked her for long years.
Fortunately she managed to escape but she couldn't come and tell her the truth because she was shy and frightened.
When she encountered her twin nieces, she felt the need to reveal the whole story.
And then the twins took her to their mother. Jo was very excited and shocked when she saw her sister. In the end she forgave her sister. And they began to live together. Eventually, they lived happily ever after.
Story ended by lkay ÇEKİRDEK-Dr. İlhami Tankut Anatolian High School - Antalya / TURKEY
JO - Version 2 - https://twin.titanpad.com/5
- was mainly worked after students from Portugal and Tunisa added their part and since Croatian students joined a bit later they decided to give a story an alternative ending!
So, this interesting story actually has two versions which only shows there are always two sides of any story. Both stories have the same beginning.
Croatian students gave a story different ending and made an illustration.
Johanna Hiller, known as Jo, is a sixteen-year-old girl, who is wrongly accused of murdering five students of her school, including her best friend Tom. She has black painted hair and blue eyes. Her lips are full and she always wears red lipstick. She had a twin sister, named Alison, who died on her birthday slipping in a wet rock which made her fall into a river, drowning herself. She’s a lonely figure who attends a dangerous place called Arcadia, an illegal bar placed in an abandoned building where new rock bands would perform.One saturday the police came into the bar and took her into prison. But she is sent to a special prison where they place teens with bad behavior called Orders of Hope managed by a cruel Romanian man called Iosif Razvan, who believed in discipline and in punishment as a way to eradicate evil.For decades his system works.
She was in that prison for more than a year. During her stay in the prison, she faces many obstacles set by different people, but she will never going to stop looking for the real killer, the one who ruined her life.
One day she was counting the days she spent in prison. And than she realized. For all this time she never suspected that only one person who was with her that day when five students died was her cousin Melisa. Melisa was one year older than Jo, and she was always angri when Jo was in the spotlight. That day Melisa just disappeared from school. And when the students were already dead she came back. She just smailed and live the class.
Jo couldn't believe her self. How come she couldn't think of that early. She began to shout for guards but there was no reply. She waited but there was no one there. When the guards came in five days they took her in big room. They said to her that she was wrongly accused of murdering but they can't do anything about that. Jo was confused, she didn't know what to do. They said to her that people wouldn't believe that she didn't kill that students because nobody saw Melisa that day and people will start accuse persion for releasing a murderer. She couldn't believe her own ears.She was wrongly accused but she sill stay falsely accuse.
Jo was left in persion for two decades. When she got out, she was totally new person. She was furious and she promised to return anyone who ruiend her life.
1. Beginning of the story taken and updated from Beatriz Lourenço, Agrupamento de Escolas de Sátão, PORTUGAL
2. Contributors to this Jo - version 2 story are:
Tomislav Turkalj, Klara Meašić, Lora Vrankić and Franka Antonia Sindičić, Gimnazija Bernardina Frankopana, Ogulin -Croatia
Johanna Hiller, known as Jo, is a sixteen-year-old girl, who is wrongly accused of murdering five students of her school, including her best friend Tom. She has black painted hair and blue eyes. Her lips are full and she always wears red lipstick. She had a twin sister, named Alison, who died on her birthday slipping in a wet rock which made her fall into a river, drowning herself. She’s a lonely figure who attends a dangerous place called Arcadia, an illegal bar placed in an abandoned building where new rock bands would perform.One saturday the police came into the bar and took her into prison. But she is sent to a special prison where they place teens with bad behavior called Orders of Hope managed by a cruel Romanian man called Iosif Razvan, who believed in discipline and in punishment as a way to eradicate evil.For decades his system works.
She was in that prison for more than a year. During her stay in the prison, she faces many obstacles set by different people, but she will never going to stop looking for the real killer, the one who ruined her life.
One day she was counting the days she spent in prison. And than she realized. For all this time she never suspected that only one person who was with her that day when five students died was her cousin Melisa. Melisa was one year older than Jo, and she was always angri when Jo was in the spotlight. That day Melisa just disappeared from school. And when the students were already dead she came back. She just smailed and live the class.
Jo couldn't believe her self. How come she couldn't think of that early. She began to shout for guards but there was no reply. She waited but there was no one there. When the guards came in five days they took her in big room. They said to her that she was wrongly accused of murdering but they can't do anything about that. Jo was confused, she didn't know what to do. They said to her that people wouldn't believe that she didn't kill that students because nobody saw Melisa that day and people will start accuse persion for releasing a murderer. She couldn't believe her own ears.She was wrongly accused but she sill stay falsely accuse.
Jo was left in persion for two decades. When she got out, she was totally new person. She was furious and she promised to return anyone who ruiend her life.
She didn't forgive ones who accused of her by mistake. She spent her rest of her life trying to find them. One day she met a person who knew all the truth about the crime and learnt everything and decided to get revenge from the real murder.
Then she planned to meet the murder and she faced him as if by chance. After a while she made him be arrested.
By İlkay ÇEKİRDEK and her students, Antalya-Turkey