Comic twist - elements of surprise by Fabian

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    1. Are the visuals helpful?

    1 5        

    2. Is the content factually correct?

    2 4        

    3. Examples from stories the students from Germany read: Are they explained well?

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    4. Examples from the things the students from France find interesting: Are they explained well? 1 2 2      

    5. Language: Accuracy

    1 5        

    6. Language: Is the language/ the commentary understandable? Is the register informal but still refrains from using swear words

     

    2 4        

    7. Overall impression: Was it helpful for you, students from France?


     

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    Language: Your choice of words is really idiomatic and there are no grammatical mistakes. I am not 100% sure whether the visuals were a welcome relief or an unwelcome distraction.

    The only thing to be criticized is that you should have gone into more detail concerning the plot twist in Holmes.

     

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