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Assessment sheet

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1. Are the visuals helpful?	3	2	1
2. Is the content factually correct?	5	1
3. Examples from stories the students from Germany read: Are they explained well?	1	4	1
4. Examples from the things the students from France find interesting: Are they explained well?	3	3
5. Language: Accuracy	6
6. Language: Is the language/ the commentary understandable? Is the register informal but still refrains from using swear words	4	2
7. Overall impression: Was it helpful for you, students from France?	3	3

Some minor issues here: No would in the if clause (1:48); 5:00 (elaborate on).

Other than that: I am not 100% sure if I find the comic relief you insert helpful or not. On the one hand, it makes me laugh, on the other hand I o not know whether it actually takes away too much attention. But I do not want to be too hard on you in this respect.

 

Good job guys!

 

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Feedback for Rebecca from the German students:

Dear Rebecca,

Thank you very much for your feedback.  We’re glad our video could help you and hope you’ll have fun with creating your own detective. We’re sorry for the language difficulties and will try to use more simple vocabulary next time or provide a translation for difficult words, however, thank you for mentioning this.

Many greetings from Germany Katharina, Sören, Jakob and Nele :)