Scene 1:

It’s Friday evening and I am happy to meet my friends. We are planning to go to the fair. At 5 pm everyone is ready to  drive  blissfully with the bikes to the fair.

Scene 2:

When we are arriving first we are locking our bikes on a fence. Then Tom is saying a bit excitedly: “Let’s go first to the bumper car.”   

Scene 3:

We are buying the tickets and then waiting for the next round. The cars are stopping and we are choosing a car. Suddenly there is the announcement that everyone must go quickly into the car, sit down and fasten the seatbelts.

Scene 4:

Me and my friends are trying hard to ram us as much as possible. We are having a lot of fun but then the round is over.

Scene 5:

After driving with the bumper car I am discussing excitedly with the guys where we can go now. First Tombert is saying: ”Let’s go to the funny cranecase.” Then Kevin is answering honestly: “But it costs a lot, 50 pence per try. It’s a game of chance, so I think we better go together to the shooting range instead.”

Scene 6:

At the shooting range each of us are buying 13 shoots for 3 pounds. Tom and Kevin are starting optimistically  the competition. Kevin is winning with 10 of 13 hits.

Scene 7:

Then it’s Tombert and my turn. We are striking the first 7 shoots but then I am missing the mark. So at the end Tombert is winning gladly with 13 of 13 hits.

Scene 8:

He can choose a price. Tombert is taking joyfully a big teddy then he is seeing a beautiful girl. He is going shyly to her and is giving her his teddy.

Scene 9:

Then we are going laughingly back to our bike because it’s late. But the bikes are gone. We are starting to look for them everywhere.

Scene 10:

After searching for a while we are calling the police. A few minutes later the police is arriving and taking us home. At home one police man is saying seriously: “We tried hard to find your bikes.”

 

Fin,

 

is this a true story? Did your bike get nicked?

Language-wise, a very neat job. As far as content is concerned, you could have written a bit more...

PHOTOSTORY BY IBE ZARAGOZA

This is a very funny implementation of my skript, but at some pictures you could maybe show more effort, by editing the pictures more.

Furthermore the second pictures maybe don't fits with the text under it.

But all in all you do a god job.