THE HOT DOG

Description

Harry is a boy. He is 15 years old, is tall, he has brown and curly hair. He is wearing black glasses. Usually wear tracksuit and his hobbie is playing tennis.

Caroline is his mother. She has blonde and straight hair, her eyes are green, is tall. In this moment she is wearing an apron.

Anni is his sister. She is 17 years old, she has short and black hair. Her eyes are green like her mother’s. Her hobbie is dancing. And her fear are spiders.

Kujo is their dog. Is black and brown, is big. It is a german shephered.  Is really cute.

 

First scene.

Harry was hungry. His blue eyes reflect this hunger. He opened the fridge and took a sausage but he didn’t find bread. He decided to call to his mother and talk her to buy bread.

Second scene

30 minutes after, Harry’s mother arrives to house with a lot of shopping bags  in her hands.

'Harry, the bread that you told me' said his mother. He lifted it and ran to the kitchen with a smile from ear to ear.

He took it out of its package and put a slice of bread in the toaster.

After put a small frying pan onto the stove's gas burner. When the oli got hot, he put the sausage. About a minute later he took the sausage.

'Ohhh, that smells bad' said Harry.

'HARRY YOU HAVE BURNED THE BREAD!' said his mother very angry.

At that time, his dog came into the kitchen , and Harry gave him bread without his mother saw him.

He decided to prepare another bread, this time with more care.

'Sorry mom' Said as he hugged her joking.

Harry went fast to the toaster and took the bread.

'Yeahhhh, now it's OK' Said with hungry face.

He put mustard, mayonnaise, ketchup on the slice. Then he added two slices of onions. On top of the onions, he placed the sausage.  And then he put some bits of hot green Chile.

When he sat at the table to eat it thought it lacked a napkin, and went for it.

'Tuck in!' said, but when he turned his head and saw his mother eating the hot dog.. 'MOOOOOOM, WHAT DO YOU DO? ARE YOU CRAZY? MY HOT DOG..' said angry.

'Sorry, Harry my son, it loocked very nice and I could not resist.. Sorry' said.

Harry went to his bedroom and he began to cry.

Scene 3

30 minutes later when Harry finished to cry he went to the kitchen again. His mother had already went to her room.

He decided to do another hot dog. And now everything went well.

IT’S MY OPPORTUNITY!- He shouted happy.

The sister went to the kitchen and said- HARRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY  I SAW A SPIDER! HELP ME!!

The hot dog fell to the floor and Harry screamed- AHHHHHHH ANNIE! MY HOT DOG..

So..so..sorry.. It wasn’t my intention..- said repentant

Don’t worry Annie, don’t worry..- he said anxious but at the final he laughing in the face of situation.

Today has not been my day.. I have it clear...- Harry said.

His sister started to do a new hot dog for her brother.

10 minutes later, Harry ate it.

At last..- sigh of relief.

The end

Feedback:

Dear Andrea,

I like your script, because you made a funny story of a simple idea. Despite of that, I found some grammatical mistakes, for example in a lot of sentences the subject is missing. 

Cosima

 

 

​Dear Andrea,

I like your skript, too.The script is very nice and I had to laugh about this simple story.

Clara

 

Dear Cosima:

Hello! I like your script. You had a very interesting way of structing but I'm afroid you didn't describe the character. I liked the topic of your story, I thought it was going to have a sad ending, because is a little bit cruel, but I was confused, it have a happy end. 

About the photostory that you did is really good, I laughed a lot with the figure of hotdog hahaha.

Kisses